Swallow again

Well... I saw the Tangled movie and I got angry that they stole my old DnD character I couldn't get it out of my had so I draw new picture of her.
Her name is Swallow (or Gwennol) and according to the rules she is a thief but that is only untrue accusation, she only has a little kleptomania She has a strong inclination to alcoholism, loves dancing and she is quite deadly with her pan... Actually, she used dual pans - one in each hand, but she also used staff so I wanted to have it there too.
I am not really satisfied with her face (she should look like Magdalena Mielcarz but it is my first portrait so it is not so bad
The verses are from old Canadian ballad She's like the Swallow, but it sounds to me like Irish I looked throught internet to find my favourite verision, but everyone sings it terribly slow and sad and too much deep-felt... But these don't fit to my Swallow at all. So if you would like to hear the propper verision which matches to her, look at web pages of Shannon (Czech music band) and there in albums you can download that one (I don't want to put here advertising link).
You can see her older verision here.

Done with pencil on two A5 papers, coloured and finished in Photoshop.